It was alright
I thought it was ok, not that many instruments in there for my liking, I would of included a deep yet warm string to really fill out the spaces and filtered it in so it got stronger and stronger.
I put alot of emotion into my songs, my latest track "Natrural Expression" was dedicated to my mother, I put every last piece of my heart into it, everyone says it makes them cry lol
Overall a nice piece though